I really like the colours i think they're really girly but yet cool at the same time! the image is really strong and you all look like a real band. the masthead and cover lines all look good on the page aswell.
I like the colour scheme used, also the font you have used for your masthead is really good. The way you have got the girls to pose is all good because it gives the audince a feeling that you magazine has attitude therefore they will want to read it. I don't think there is anything you need to improve
I really like the colours i think they're really girly but yet cool at the same time! the image is really strong and you all look like a real band. the masthead and cover lines all look good on the page aswell.
ReplyDeletereally good colurs used and grabs the readers attention also, it really appeals to your selected target audience
ReplyDeleteWhat I Like:
ReplyDelete- Colour scheme is cool.
- Image is clear.
- Masthead stands out.
- No gaps.
What could be improved:
- More interesting fonts for coverlines.
Really good main image, the purple and yellow cover lines work well together, and I like the masthead font and colour. Also no gaps.
ReplyDeleteI like the colour scheme used, also the font you have used for your masthead is really good. The way you have got the girls to pose is all good because it gives the audince a feeling that you magazine has attitude therefore they will want to read it.
ReplyDeleteI don't think there is anything you need to improve
I also think this has really developed from your first attept at creating a front page.
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